I think thats a bit of a waste of space...
But, I'll try to fix it.
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It's needed. Everyone who writes a book and publishes it does that. It makes it easier to read.

Umm, ok. *sighs* I have a headache again... I'll do that tomorrow.

I still think this is really good. But I have to agree, the spacing would make it easier to read. Anyway, it's your choice if you want to space or not.

Or someone else could do it for you. That is the whole point of editors.

Ok. I'll ask one.

Artemis sat at his computer the next morning in his favorite suit, frowning at the screen, when Butler knocked. "Come in." His door opened and his body guard stepped in. "Ms. Fowl is waiting downstairs, Artemis."

Artemis peered at him from behind his desk and over mounds of papers. "Alright. I'll be right there." Butler nodded, stepping back and closing the door. Artemis glanced once more at Loich Matitiu's birth certificate before shutting down his computer and grabbing his jacket, disappearing out the door.


Loich finished watering the plants outside the back door and set down the canister next to the pots. She sat on the back steps, taking her long thin black skirt with her. Her green eyes wandered off twords the hills not far from their backyard, stopping on the rock Artemis had been sleeping against. The wind blew locks of her soft brown hair around her damp eyes as she folded her hands in her lap. "Artemis..."

A hand on her shoulder made her jerk her head up to see Artemis standing over her. "Loich?" Her eyes widened.

"Artemis? Artemis!" Artemis's gentle smile spread as she leaped up and hugged him, wrapping his arms around her waist. "I'm sorry, Loich, can you ever forgive me?"

Loich looked up at him. "Of course I can! Why did you come back?" Artemis chuckled. "Lets just say my parents would like to give you their thanks." He motioned through the doorway to Mrs. and Mr. Matitiu standing next to Artemis's parents and Butler.

Loich's face broke into a smile. "These are your parents? Wow!" Artemis loosened his grip on her waist by Butler's look. "Yes. I told them you let me stay with you for a few days, so they wanted to thank you in person."

Loich turned to Angeline. "Mrs. Fowl, Mr. Fowl, it's wonderful to meet you." Angeline smiled gently. "No, my dear, it was us who wanted to meet you! My Arty told us all about how you let him stay, so thank you."

Artemis released her, taking her hand. His blue eyes drifted to her green ones. "Loich, I may be part of your family, but they need me there." Loich squeezed his hand. "I understand, but I'm still glad you came." Artemis smiled. "So am I."

End
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Ok, that gets that over with. :3
Artemis and Loich just kinda go back to their normal lives, with small get-togethers from time to time, though nothing more grows between them. So, it's truely Happily Never After.

Aww, cute! Nice ending! Though for some reason, the fact that they sort of drift away makes me feel sad, I think this was a really good way to end the fic. Great job with it!

Thank you, MK.