DN Angel- Scarrs of the soul

**Moonlite Knight** · Subject: Re: DN Angel- Scarrs of the soul Thu Jul 24, 2008 12:24 pm

I say you should keep going, this is pretty good so far!

Only, it would be easier to read if you seperated it into paragraphs when epople are talking. I think your grammer's pretty good, the only mistake I caught was "I know your embarassed." It should be "I know you're embarrassed."

Anyway, I hope you do continue, but it's your choice!

_________________

please check out HS7's site: http://writersforum-light.msnboard.net/index.htm

**Mysteriouswriter94** · Subject: Re: DN Angel- Scarrs of the soul Thu Jul 24, 2008 8:15 pm

*moans* I can't... I have no idea when it'll end or what the ending could be... Sorry, but I think I'll drop this one.

_________________
Practice makes perfect, but even if no one's perfect, still practice.

Darkness of light you can, through the saddness take your flight.
And become the wings that peirce the veil, spreading strong and true tonight.

When you walk away, I count the steps that you take.
Do you see how much I need you right now?"

Stupid people stand on the left side of the internet, because I'm right-handed.

Crazy doesn't even begin to explain me. I'm past phsyco by now.

**Moonlite Knight** · Subject: Re: DN Angel- Scarrs of the soul Tue Aug 05, 2008 2:17 pm

Aw, ok

_________________

please check out HS7's site: http://writersforum-light.msnboard.net/index.htm